
Free to read: the first chapter
The Silent Visitor
Chapter 1The Hunt
The mountains had gone quiet.
John Carter noticed it the way a man notices his own heartbeat—by its absence. No birdsong drifted through the bare branches. No squirrel chatter skittered across the forest floor. Even the wind seemed hesitant, slipping between the trees as if unsure it was welcome.
John stopped walking.
At sixty-five, he had learned not to rush moments like this. Youth rushed. Experience listened.
He rested his gloved hand on the stock of his rifle and let his breathing slow. The cold Pennsylvania air burned clean in his lungs, sharp and familiar. Late November had stripped the mountains down to their bones. Oaks and maples stood naked against a pale sky, their fallen leaves damp and dark beneath his boots. Somewhere far below, water moved—steady, patient, unconcerned.
But the woods around him were holding their breath.
John had been hunting these ridges since he was old enough to carry his father’s spare knife. He knew the difference between quiet and wrong. This was wrong.
He shifted his weight carefully, testing the ground before taking another step. The scar on his left forearm tugged faintly as the cold settled deeper into it—a reminder from decades ago that the mountains forgave nothing quickly.
“Alright,” he muttered, more to himself than the woods. “What spooked you?”
The trail he followed wasn’t marked on any map. It was one of those paths that only existed if you knew it did—pressed into the earth by generations of deer, hunters, and time itself. He had followed it that morning expecting a long, uneventful day. Maybe a buck. Maybe nothing at all.
Nothing was usually fine.
This wasn’t nothing.
A low hum brushed the edges of his hearing. At first, John thought it was tinnitus—another gift of age—but it didn’t come from inside his head. It came from the mountain.
He frowned and turned slowly, scanning the tree line. The sound wasn’t loud. It wasn’t even constant. It pulsed, just faint enough that he wondered if he imagined it.
Then the ground trembled.
Not an earthquake. Not even enough to make him stumble. Just a shiver, like the mountain had exhaled.
John’s hand tightened on the rifle.
He waited.
Years ago, impatience might have pushed him forward. Years ago, curiosity might have overridden caution. But age had taught him that the wilderness always revealed itself in its own time—if you didn’t force it.
The hum deepened.
And then he smelled it.
Not smoke. Not rot. Something metallic. Sharp. Clean. Like rain striking hot iron.
John moved off the trail, angling uphill toward the source. Each step was deliberate, measured. His boots found rock and root without sound. His mind slipped into the old rhythm—observe, adjust, advance.
That was when the trees ended.
Not thinned. Not broken.
Ended.
Before him, the forest gave way to a wide, gouged clearing where earth and stone had been torn open as if by a giant’s hand. Trees lay snapped and flattened, their trunks scorched black along the edges. At the center of it all sat something that did not belong to this world.
John stopped breathing.
The object was large—larger than any truck—but it had no wheels, no wings, no recognizable shape. Its surface was smooth and curved, dull silver shot through with faint lines that glowed and faded like embers beneath ice. Parts of it were buried deep into the mountain, as if it had fallen from the sky and simply refused to stop.
There were no flames. No smoke. Just that low, steady hum vibrating through the ground and into John’s bones.
“Ain’t no plane,” he whispered.
He had seen wrecks before. Helicopters. Small aircraft. He had helped pull men from twisted metal in his younger days. This wasn’t twisted. It was… intact. Wounded, maybe. But not broken.
His instincts screamed at him to leave. To turn around, hike back down the mountain, and let someone else deal with whatever this was.
Then he saw the figure.
It lay near the craft’s edge, partially obscured by shattered rock and fallen leaves. Long limbs folded awkwardly beneath a tall, slender frame. Skin pale—too pale—almost white against the dark earth.
John swallowed.
He approached slowly, rifle lowered but ready. As he drew closer, details sharpened. The being was taller than any man John had ever seen, even lying prone. Its body was unmarked by hair, its skin smooth and faintly luminous in the cold light. The chest rose and fell—barely.
Alive.
The hum faltered.
John crouched a few feet away, heart thudding hard now. His mind raced through every story he had ever heard, every late-night radio show and newspaper headline dismissed as nonsense.
None of them mattered.
What mattered was that something intelligent lay injured in front of him.
And it was afraid.
The sensation hit him suddenly, like walking into a room thick with emotion. Not his own. Not imagined. Fear—sharp and disoriented—washed through him, followed by pain so vivid John’s breath caught in his throat.
He staggered back a step.
“What in God’s—”
The being’s eyes opened.
They were dark. Not black, exactly, but deep and reflective, like still water under starlight. They fixed on John with startling clarity.
The fear spiked.
Then—confusion.
John felt it again, stronger this time. Images flashed behind his eyes: falling, tearing metal, light bending the wrong way. A sense of wrongness so profound it ached.
He pressed a hand to his chest, steadying himself.
“Easy,” he said, voice rough. “I’m not here to hurt you.”
The words felt inadequate the moment they left his mouth.
The being did not move. But the hum around them shifted, rising and falling in an uneven rhythm.
Understanding came not as words, but as a realization that settled deep in John’s mind.
It hears you.
No. Worse.
It feels you.
John had spent a lifetime learning how to control his emotions—how to keep fear from showing, how to remain calm when others panicked. Now, that discipline mattered more than ever.
He forced his breathing to slow. Forced his racing thoughts to settle.
“I can help,” he said softly. “If you’ll let me.”
For a long moment, nothing happened.
Then the pain lessened.
The being’s gaze never left him, but the fear eased, replaced by something cautious. Curious.
John reached out slowly, palm open, stopping short of contact. Up close, the air around the being felt different—charged, like the moment before lightning struck.
“I’m John,” he said. “John Carter.”
The name echoed back in his mind—not as sound, but as recognition.
John.
The being’s chest shuddered. Its lips parted, but no sound came. Instead, a single word formed—not spoken, but placed gently into John’s thoughts.
Xylar.
John exhaled, the breath shaky despite his effort to stay calm.
“Well,” he murmured, a faint, incredulous smile touching his lips, “you sure picked one hell of a place to crash.”
Far above them, the clouds shifted.
Somewhere in the distance, engines roared to life.
John didn’t know it yet, but the hunt he had set out on that morning was already over.
Something far greater had found him instead.